This was written a couple of months ago...and now,finally,it's on9...check it out
Scratching the sand by the shore,
Gaping holes that never close,
Wounds with no anaesthesia,by God's will,
I beg you,O' Death,
Take my life,
and End my misery,
This suffering,this burden,my throat's burning
As the Demon came,vile of water in hand
As my sight starts fading,
Came figures of light,
Faces blur,reaching their hands,
Was it God?
Was it angels?
or was it Satan?
I tried to reach,my hands won't move
And as I take my final breath,
My soul screams,
As agony,torture,a whole of eternity awaits
I tried to run,my legs weren't there,
I tried to scream,my voice's gone
Tendrils of pain,tears flowing down,
My throat burns,the thirst's killing me
As footsteps start to fade,
I'm all alone,darkness embraced me,
Waiting for my judgement,
Crunching bones,serpents did
repent for your sins,mortal
What awaits,what shall come
In the moment,you shall know
What lies ahead...
...Any comments?